Just received a second version from Deepak Khatnani which I'd like to share.
It has a particularly endearing start that listeners will surely enjoy:
Do din bhi agar meri si halat ho jaye Maalom shab e gham ki haqiqat ho jaye Bejurm o khata mujh ko mitanay walay Allah karay tujh ko mohabbat ho jaye
Ab sabr karo nala e paiham na karo Jab mein he nahi hoon to mera gham na karo Yeh apni ruswai hai apne haaton Lillah meri laash pe maatam na karo
Wo un ko mera marg e nagahan nadeeda nadeeda Sub ke hoonton pe tabassum tha mere qatl ke baad Jaanay kya sooch ke rota raha qaatil tanha Wo un ko mera marg e nagahan, nadeeda nadeeda
aur jigar bey chain laikin guftugu sanjeeda sanjeeda ajab masti bhari aankhein magar tarseeda tarseeda sar e baali tabassum lab pe dil ranjeeda ranjeeda manaya ja raha hai mera gham posheeda posheeda
tamasha dekhiye mayree lehad se sar nahi uth'ta mujhe khud he mita baithe hein, aur khud he pasehmaan hein manaya ja raha hai mera gham posheeda posheeda
yeh kab se aa gayeen tabdeeliyan khayalon mein huzoor kab se ghareebon kay khairkhuwah howay manaya ja raha hai mera gham posheeda posheeda
dam-e-akheer qayamat yeh dha raha hai koi ke mout aanay ko hai, aur ja raha hai koi mere khuda, mujhe thori si zindagi day day udaas mere janazay se ja raha hay koi, dekho manaya ja raha hai mera gham posheeda posheeda
sabr-o- qaraar chheena, surat dikha ke tu ne barbad ker dia dil, dil mein sama ke tu ne basti ujaar dali, basti basa ke tu ne aray apna bhi dil dukhaya, mujh ko mita ke tu ne ab, manaya ja raha hai mera gham posheeda posheeda
bohot badnaam hoga hashr mein tu naam ke badle unhein shohrat se kya matlab, jo hein Allah ke bande yeh niyyat chor meri bandagi, dekhein jahan walay mazaa jab hai ke dunya per na ho zahir tere sajde khuda ki tu ibadat ker magar posheeda posheeda
sajdo ka sila jannat maange Allah se yeh ujrat maange karta hai ibadat ka souda zahid na hoa mazdoor hoa bus! khuda ki tu ibadat ker magar posheeda posheeda
kya ibadat hai teri jab ke tu yaksu he na tha rabb to moujood tha, ay shaikh wahaan tu he na tha dil hai behatka hoa bekaif nazar aata hai tu ibadat mein bhi dunya ki khabar rakhta hai
aik din majnu ka aisa haal tha yaad e laila mein sarapa choor tha khaak e sehra chhanta phirta tha wo wahaane laila her ghari karta tha wo
hoshiyari dekheiye deewane ki sair karne chal dia veeranaey ki aadmi aik parh raha tha wahan namaaz dil mein kuch rakhta na tha sooz o guzaaz ker raha tha wo namaz e haq adaa majnu us ke samnay ho ker chala khatam ker ke phir namaaz us ne kaha tujh ko doon is fail ki mein kya saza aa gaya meri ibadat mein khalal samnay se tu gaya mere nikal bola majnu ke mein ne laila ki qasam dekha nahi
bola majnu ke mein ne laila ki qasam dekha nahi warna samnay sajde ke mein aata nahi bola majnu ishq e laila mein sarapa choor tha aur dekhne se mein tujhe majboor tha per tu khuda ke samnay kaisa juhka apni aankhon se raha tu dekhta mujh ko to hai ishq fani zaat ka tujh ko to hai ishq hai maula zaat ka kia isi ko kehte hein sooz o gudaas kia isi ko kehte hein sooz o gudaas ja namaazi dekh li teri namaaz bus! khuda ki tu ibadat ker magar posheeda posheed
kia isi ko kehte hein sooz o gudaas ja namaazi dekh li teri namaaz khuda ki tu ibadat ker magar poshida poshida
le ke tasbeeh aur musallah aik aabid chal diya dhoondne Allah ko sehra mein wo rehne laga aik hiran bhi saath mein us ke wahaan rehne laga aur usi sehra mein wo bhi dorne phirne laga
aik din zahid ne pocha yaar ye kya baat hai arsa e muddat se tera aur mera saath hai tujh ko bethe dekhta hoon aur na sotay dekhta ja baja phirta hai tu aur ya ke rehta hai khara
sun ke bola yeh hiran! ta'ajub ki kya baat hai aashiqo ke wastay kya din hai aur kya raat hai mere andar mushk hai mein is liyeh rehta hoon mast tere ander ishq hai tu is liyeh rehta hai mast
mushk ki khushboo se hardam doorta phirta hoon mein apni aankhon se khuda ko dekhta rehta hoon mein us se milne ka tareeqa aa tu mujh se seekh le ishq mein hasti mita de phir tu Allah dekh le
khuda ke waste zahid na ker numa'ishi sajde khuda ki tu ibadat ker magar posheeda posheeda
jahan tak ho sakay mazloom ko ronay nahi dete aur kisi nadaar ko bhooka kabhi sonay nahi dete bakar e pardaposhi khalq per khone nahi dete khabar is haath ki us haath ko honay nahi dete sakhi khairat karte hein magar posheeda posheeda
tumhare samnay betha hoa hoon sakht mushkil mein musafir jaisay aa jata hai wehshatnak manzil mein bayaan karte hoay darta hoon jo kuch hai mere dil mein buri kuch aur to baatein nahi hein teri mehfil mein magar yeh chupke chupke guftugu posheeda posheeda
aur kisi ghar ki taraf takna kabhi phir mur ke ghabrana kaheen per chandni ko dekh ker saaye mein chupp jana qamar aik he na kya laakhon sitaro ne na pehchana ajab andaaz se waday pe unka raat ko aana dabay paaon nazar behki howi posheeda posheeda
